Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Interview: Valerie Ormond

After learning more about Valerie and her work with horses, let's get to know more about her writing life, and how Believing in Horses came to be. 


1. What was your inspiration for "Believing in Horses?" I wanted to tell a story about what people are capable of when they believe in what they are doing, no matter how challenging the mission might seem at the time.

The actual idea for writing a story at all came from the previous owner of one of my horses, when I told her to tell her daughter that the horse was going to Washington, DC, to do something important, like be a Senator.  The owner suggested I use that idea for a children’s book.

2. How did you decide what age your main character was going to be, and how did that affect the story? As a horse person myself, I spend a lot of time at the barn, and I interact with many young people from ages 4 to 18.  I chose to have my main character, Sadie, as 12, because this is an age where young people often seem to start doubting themselves.  It is also an age I remember well as still enjoying the pleasures of childhood without the peer pressure of the teens.  I believe Sadie’s age affects the story because she takes on a very difficult task at her young age, and while she solves problems on her own, she still relies on others to assist.   

3. Your knowledge of horses in evident in this book. Can you tell us about your personal experiences with horses? A mounted police officer put me on his horse when I was three years old, and I was hooked.  I started taking riding lessons when I was seven and finally leased my own horse when I was a teenager.  I remained in love with horses through adulthood, but due to my Navy career and the moves, was not able to fully commit to horse ownership again until just ten years ago.  My husband and I now have one 20-year-old pony, a 14-year-old American Quarter Horse, and my 6-year-old pinto, Lucky, the “star” of the book.  I am a Certified Horsemanship Association certified riding instructor in both English and Western riding, a member and volunteer for numerous horse organizations, and I compete in the National Capital Adult Equestrian League and other local amateur shows.  I still take lessons, ride as much as I can, and absolutely love trail riding.  I’ve ridden at ranches across the U.S. and in Canada, Spain, and Ireland, and even had the good fortune to be able to gallop a young Arabian colt among the pyramids in Egypt.  I think horses are magical and have seen what they can do for people, which is why I try so hard to introduce people to the world of horses.       

4. The main character, Sadie, has been promised a horse at the beginning of the book. How does this promise transform her character? DelSheree, you ask GREAT questions!  The promise of a horse transforms Sadie from feeling sorry for herself about another move and her dad’s upcoming deployment to a girl with an important task.  Sadie becomes focused on finding a home for her new horse, and finding her first horse, which distracts her from life’s other stressors at the time.  Sadie gains a sense of independence and learns some valuable lessons about decision making and listening to advice. 

5. Sadie works with several people, family and non-family that help her through the story. How do these characters contribute to the idea of believing in something? Many of the characters believe not only in Sadie’s mission, but in Sadie.  Sadie’s honesty and commitment convinces people to believe in her and what she is doing.  

6. What type of research did you do for this book? I’ll break this one down into two parts – the writing, and the story.  As far as the writing, since this was my first foray into children’s literature, I began with Write4Kids.com, and then became a member of the Children’s Book Insider Clubhouse. The Children’s Book Insider Clubhouse provided excellent background information, teaching modules, discussion forums, articles, and more, which really helped me with some of the basics such as the length of the book.  I also read many middle grade and young adult novels, and re-read a few of my favorites, to get a feel for the genre from an author’s perspective vs. a reader’s perspective.

Concerning the story, having grown up with a dad in the Navy, being in the Navy myself, and married to a man in the Navy, I felt I didn’t have to do any research on life in a military family.  For horses, although I felt I had the general background I needed, including having dealt with many of the horse issues Sadie deals with in the novel, I did not feel I had adequate information on the unwanted horse problem.  I chose to focus on this issue because I knew of the growing problem and had been involved through some of my volunteer work.  But there came a point where I knew I needed to see horse rescues hands-on and speak with the people working these issues every day.  I researched and visited the horse rescues in the book and remain involved with them to this day, including providing them a portion of the book proceeds.  “Horse savers” are among the most dedicated, hard-working people I’ve seen in the horse industry, and I’m honored to work with some of them.  The saddest part of my research was during a live horse auction; I wanted to save them all.      

7. Can you tell us about how this book has been prepared to be used in schools? I am very fortunate that my brother, Eddy Ormond, a teacher for 20 years, became very involved during my writing process, including accompanying me on some of the above mentioned research trips.  My brother provided valuable input from spending years with fourth and fifth graders, and he is, in fact, the real life Mr. Edwards teacher character in the book.  Eddy prepared Discussion Guides and Activities for my web site, and teachers and homeschoolers raved about them and asked when they would be available in print.  We listened, and published Teacher’s Tack for Believing In Horses, a comprehensive 76-page teacher’s guide to help make any teacher’s job easier in working with students and the book.  Additionally, my brother visits schools with me when he can, presenting a lively Talk Show format about the book, reading, and writing, that engages the kids every time.  I’ve been very lucky to have a caring, talented teacher who understands the demands on teachers as one of those characters who believes in me and knows how to share knowledge with students.    

8. Who are your favorite authors? All time favorite author and book:  Primrose Cumming and Silver Snaffles.  Others:  Nicholas Sparks; Gennifer Choldenko; Janet Evanovich; Sara Gruen; Deborah Wiles; Michael Morpurgo; Aryn Kyle; Patricia Cornwell….and so many more.

9. Do you have any interesting habits or rituals when you write? I really enjoy when I sit down to write one thing, and the story takes over, and takes me places I hadn’t thought about until I was immersed in words.  I like to let the story go where it wants to and see what happens.  I can always edit it out later, right?  

10. Can you tell us about any other books or projects you are working on? Right now I am working on a sequel to Believing In Horses, with a working title, Believing In Horses, Too.  While my first book highlighted unwanted horses, this book highlights equine therapy.  I’ve done some exciting research and hope to introduce readers to more about horses, life in a military family, and the continued growth of the main character, Sadie.  I was a contributing author to Chique Travel Adventures 2012:  Finding Beauty and Inspiration on Your Travels , scheduled for Fall 2012 publication by Flagrans Press, and an upcoming book for the Voice For The Horse organization, also scheduled for Fall 2012 publication by J.B. Max Publishing.  I plan to continue visiting schools, conducting writing workshops, and most importantly, encouraging people to believe in themselves and their causes.
  
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You can connect with Valerie by email at Valerie@BelievingInHorses.com, through her WebsiteFacebookBlog, or Twitter

Believing in Horses is available now through Valerie's website as well as Amazon

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Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Introducing: Valerie Ormond

Valerie and Chance
This week's featured author is Valerie Ormond, and if you couldn't guess by her beautiful picture, Valerie loves horses. Her passion for these beautiful animals goes beyond the occasion ride. Read on to find out more about Valerie and her work with horses. 

"Valerie Ormond spent the majority of her adult life as a Naval Intelligence Officer. The daughter of two English majors, and an English major herself, she always had a great interest in books and writing. She now combines her life experiences, love of horses, and interest in writing in her second career. Her first novel, Believing In Horses (March 2011, J.B. Max Publishing), tells the story of a young girl saving unwanted horses. Believing In Horses was a selection for the National Education Association’s Read Across America program, the nation’s largest annual reading event; earned the Parent Tested Parent Approved Official Winners Seal of Approval; and won the Gold Medal in the Stars and Flags Book Awards program.

Valerie writes freelance for a variety of publications and organizations and contributed to the recently-published best seller, 5 Must-Know Secrets for Today’s College Girl (Lauren Salamone, June 2011, Frederick Fell Publishers, Inc). Ormond holds memberships in American Horse Publications, the Military Writers Society of America, and the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators.

She believes in the healing power of horses and participates in numerous equine-related organizations including the Maryland Horse Council, Certified Horsemanship Association, National Capital Adult Equestrian League, and the Equine Assisted Growth and Learning Association. She serves on the Board of Directors for Desire Ministries, a nonprofit dedicated to adopting rescued and unwanted horses for use as partners with in educating, mentoring, and counseling individuals, children, and families through various equine assisted activities.

Her education includes a Master of Strategic Studies from the U.S. Army War College in Carlisle, Penn.; a Master of Strategic Intelligence, Defense Intelligence College, Washington, DC, and two Bachelor of Arts degrees in English and Mass Communication from Towson University, Towson, Md. She is a lifetime member of the Naval Intelligence Professionals and Disabled American Veterans and a strong supporter of the military and veterans.

She lives with her husband Jaime Navarro, also a Navy veteran and horseman, in, Maryland, where they enjoy the company of their wonderful families, friends, horses, and dogs." 

You can connect with Valerie by email at Valerie@BelievingInHorses.com, through her Website, Facebook, Blog, or Twitter

Believing in Horses is available now through Valerie's website as well as Amazon

You can also enter to win a paperback copy of Believing in Horses by leaving a comment this week or following Valerie Ormond on Facebook or Twitter. Don't forget to click on the Rafflecopter button to make sure your entry is counted. 


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Monday, September 3, 2012

New Book: Believing in Horses

It's the last day of a long weekend, but you still have time to get in one more book! This week we'll be inviting Valerie Ormond to the blog to talk about her middle grade novel, Believing in Horses. This is the first middle grade novel we've had on the blog, but teens and adults shouldn't pass it by too quickly. 

"After her family moves to Maryland and her dad deploys to Afghanistan, Sadie gets a new young horse named Lucky who proves to be a handful—but all of that is just the beginning of the trouble in this young adult novel. Together, Sadie and Lucky encounter horse thieves, Maryland storms, and unwanted horses destined for auction and uncertain futures. Sadie makes it her personal mission to save these animals, meeting fellow people dedicated to rescuing horses along the way, while learning that others are driven only by greed." 

Believing in Horses is available now through Valerie's website as well as Amazon

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Sunday, September 2, 2012

The Labor Day Book Fair is Live!

Melynda's Labor Day Book Fair is now live. Thanks to Wayman Publishing, you can download their top ten novels free today through the 5th. Click on the links below to start downloading free books. 

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Excelsior (Geore Sirois)

Put down the pen. Pick up the sword. Unleash the hero within.

Matthew spent years creating the ultimate comic hero. He never dreamed the true hero would be within himself.


More Nonsense (Melynda Fleury)

A hilarious anthology from a very witty writer.

The Sashbuckle Chuckle (Pat Hatt, Caleb Wallace)

Join One Shoe Kangaroo as he tracks down the evil Captain Frown Clown and his crew. They have stolen the magic from his town. Will One Shoe Kangaroo be able to track Captain Frown Clown down?

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From Mr. P (a wild little boy who loves animals) to Meaghan (a driving teenager) and Kyle (a young man who wants to visit Italy), Melynda's year starts with a bang. 
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The Sword of Senack (EC Stilson)

Aliya Fisher knows nothing about her true heritage until a vindictive sorceress kidnaps her brother and sister. The young adventurer must take up her birthright, battle strange creatures, and find the Sword of Senack if she hopes to best the witch. But even if Aliya finds the famed weapon and survives the perilous oceanic journey, the enchantress is far more than she appears. How does one defeat an immortal who lusts for revenge?

The Golden Sky (EC Stilson)

The night I met Cade I never would’ve thought that two years later, after we were homeless street musicians in Hawaii, we would have a little girl and another baby on the way. Our son was born with the type of birth defects that make televangelists cringe. As his health waned, my own breath evaded me, like I was the one who needed the ventilator—the life support. The “death home” gave him a really nice funeral, the kind I’d never wished to attend. When they tried closing his casket, I nearly fell on my face, not wanting them to shut the lid on my baby. 

We lost it after that, totally cemented in our grief. Cade got into drugs, joined a rock and roll band, and even grew out his damn hair. At the time, I was sick of “the oatmeal option” (the only food we had), so I kicked Cade out of the house, and started modeling and working as a diesel mechanic. That was how I met Earl, an old man and unlikely best friend; the “big sag,” a middle aged woman who still flashed folks, and "The Cowboy" a man who fell in love with me. 

It was slow at first, but Cade reverted to the man I’d busked with years before. It wasn’t until I killed a rogue skunk, and my daughter nearly choked on a fry, that I gave my husband another chance. But could our marriage recover from the death of our son?


The book practically cried for me to spare its life, and for a moment I thought I'd rather burn in Hell than lose something my brother had given me in love. The pastor nudged me, though, and my heart turned to ice.
I thought of all those hours my brother had read to me. I thought of all that time he'd invested.
I couldn't throw it into the fire; not the last book of the trilogy. That funny little dwarf stared at me from the cover. Then, I closed my eyes. I stepped so close to the flames they almost ate my skin. I tore the book in front of those kids. I put on quite a show throwing in a section at a time because I couldn't stand sending the whole thing in at once. When the last pages went up in flame, and the dwarf on the cover curled with death, I dropped to my knees and cried. The kids all hooted and screamed in ecstasy, thinking I'd been freed, when the ropes of religion had just twisted tighter.

Surrounded by hypocrites, Elisa's foundation starts crumbling. She doesn't know who to turn to. That's when she meets a mysterious man. But maybe she shouldn't trust him.
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Saturday, September 1, 2012

Meylnda's Labor Day Blogfest and Book Fair!

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Friday, August 31, 2012

Review: The Royal Assassin

Reis was promised the Heir of the Chalice as a companion, only to have her stolen away by another man. Frustrated and confused, Reis avoids the couple as long as possible, but is shocked when his promised gift comes in the form of his stolen lover's child. The question now, is whether or not Reis can protect his beloved Shadowen from not only her vicious father, but from a dangerous fate Reis never expected. 

One of the most compelling aspects of this book is the world the characters live in. Valantis is an underground society ruled by magic, but not your typical fantasy-style magic. Valantis is ruled by shadows. These shadows are everywhere. They can be used to travel, drawn from to gain power, and to a select few they can do even more. I enjoyed this unique style of magic for its creative slant as well as its somewhat dark quality. 

The relationship that develops between Shadowen and Reis was very good as well. Reis meets Shadowen when she is a small child and immediately knows she will be his. That may seem a little creepy on the surface, but Nemnich handles it well, keeping Reis focused on her protection through the early years, then easing the relationship into a more romantic stage. This was a very tortured relationship, and the tension between them made it quite compelling. Shadowen has had a very difficult life which causes her to fear Reis' love. Put that up against Reis' desire for Shadowen fighting against his need to guide and protect her, and you start to see what I mean. As a warning to younger readers, there were several sex scenes and adult topics, that while not terribly graphic, were descriptive. 

The overall storyline was also interesting. This book is a small glimpse into the arching plot of the Chalice, the effect corruption has on this world, and the fates of these two characters. Nemnich gives you good reason to keep reading further into the series. 

Aside from the interesting story and world, and good romantic relationship, there were a few areas that gave me some trouble. The beginning of the story was quite slow. There was a lot of explaining about the world as Reis went through day to day motions rather than letting the reader experience this world first hand. This was a show vs. tell issue that mainly held up the first several chapters, but was also an issue throughout the book. 

I also felt like the language used wasn't fantasy based and it took away from the reality of the story. This came through in the prose as well as the dialog. Straight up fantasy usually leans toward a more formal writing style, even when it comes to internal thoughts and dialog, and this felt to modern for me to really fall into the fantasy mindset. Serious fantasy readers may have the same issue. 

Another area that needed improvement was the editing. With indie publishing, it is hard for the author to catch all the mistakes on their own, but there were enough errors that it was distracting. Another pass at cleaning this up would help improve the overall experience. 

As a whole, the story and characters were interesting and entertaining. The modern language, editing errors, show vs. tell, and over-explaining gave the manuscript a less than polished feel. For some this won't be a problem, for others it will. The Royal Assassin has good potential as a series, but it did have shortcomings that will hopefully be addressed in future books.  

Would I recommend this book? I would because the story was good, but only selectively. Hard core fantasy readers may struggle with the writing style, the sex scenes and adult topics were enough that I wouldn't pass it on to my nieces, and the more technical issues will hold up picky readers. 

Who would I recommend this book to? Adult readers, mainly light fantasy readers who lean toward urban fantasy than strict fantasy and won't be bothered by the more modern style. Those readers looking for a good romance will enjoy Reis and Shadowen as well. 

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Thursday, August 30, 2012

Favorites: The Royal Assassin

Like Shireen, I find shadows both a little scary and fascinating at the same time. I think a lot of people feel that way about shadows. One of the most interesting aspects of The Royal Assassin was the way shadows were brought to life within the story. 

Shadows are not simply an absence of light in this story. They are alive, in a way, and an integral part of the world the characters live in. Reis is able to travel through shadows, stepping from on to another even though the may be quite a ways apart. I liked the idea that while the shadows were individual, they were also all connected.

It gave the impression that the world was constantly being watched by these shadows. Again, it was an idea that was slightly disturbing, yet also reassuring in some ways. The characters were never truly alone. At times, the shadows were even able to help and protect Shadowen. It was an interesting concept that added to the overall story. 

Read on to find out more about the next book in the Shadows of Myst Series ~ The Royal Seer


Scious the Royal Seer from the Royal House of Darkness and Shadow is not only the most celebrated Seer to date he is also the longest standing one. His visions are powerful and so is his magic. Yet such power comes secrets and with secrets come vulnerability. This keeps Scious on guard and prepared at all times. However nothing will prepare him for his encounter with a strong willed Nightelf by the name of Vestrial. He could see everything except her. Her future eludes him, which only intrigues him. He wants her for his lover but he settles for her as his seamstress.

Vestrial born part Nightelf and Mystic is truly gifted with her magic, yet she has no idea how gifted her talents are. She has no idea when she makes an errand for the Mystic Oracle that her life is about to suddenly change. That the Royal Seer, a single man, a Mystic, will introduce her to magic like she's never known before. There's something about the Royal Seer that touches her heart and her soul.

Although relationships between Mystics and Nightelves are forbidden there is something about Vestrial that he cannot let go of. There is something so pure and untouched inside her that never ceases to amaze and astound him. It's not until he's thrust into a vision he will never escape from that he fully understands why.

Myst's future lies in the balance and the Royal Seer has seen the outcome of two possibilities. He knows his actions will decide the future of not only Vestrial but of all of Myst. He prays he chooses wisely.

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